What do you think of my story? (The wheelschair chronicals)?

"oh my oh my" Said beth as she admired the fire painted wheels on the new wheelstead 2000. She acknowledged the price of the wheelchair but to her it was just a figure. "ILL TAKE IT!!" She sounded as she lay on the floor with pure joy, a puddle of 'exitment' leaked from beths left leg "sorry that happens alot, im here becuase im broken, thats what my mum says anyways'' . As she handed the man her huge wob of notes she pulled herself up into the wheelchair with lightning speed "TURN THIS BABY UP TURBO!!" she rammed down the ally way, dodging the cracks in the pavement wobbling side to side licking her lips franticly with exitement. "wooOOOAAAhHhH!" she said with a shake in her voice. then BANG! she fell over sideways, her legs as dead as usual. but the rush was still written all over her face "Oh you!!" she said as she slapped her leg, her leg shook and rippled as there was still no life left in them. The End.