Is this poem good?

i think its great expect i do get the magpie sentence try writing a poem thats free style (dosent ryme) i have a great poem for you to try try writing a kaiku peom there are 3 lines the first one is 5 sylabolls long and has to be about nature or like zen than second line has to be 7 sylabolls and the third 5 sylabolls i think you would be really good at it