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The tiger is the largest of all the cat family and it is said to be the most fearsome predator in our time. The Bengal tiger is one of six sub-species of the tiger. There are five other species included the Amur, Indochinese, Malayan, South China, and Sumatran. Three tiger sub-species have become extinct in the past 70 years due to the actions of the human race, The Bali, Gavan, and Caspian. Each tiger sub-species are threatened due to poaching and habitat loss almost every year. The Bengal tiger is found throughout Asia but mostly found in the following locations; Bangladesh, Bhutan, China, India, Myanmar, and Nepal.